Read the following quote by an …

The evolution process supported by examples from the text: 
- Dumb cow---- people’s perception of her lack of sense, stammering which kept her quiet and submissive demeanour, most of the times 
Going to school----guidance of the teacher and education, overcame stammering- instilled confidence and a sense of self-esteem 
- Did not succumb to the greedy demands of the prospective groom and spoke out. 
Conclusion:  This journey of Bholi’s growth clearly showcases the idea of being an individual and not being exploited by people or circumstances. Instead, evolves to being a person being proactive and contributing to the wellbeing of others around 
(which is exactly what she decides to do)
Competency applied for : 
Content- 
• Required to display a clear growth part of the character to bring out the change 
• Support of / reference to textual evidence 
Expression- 
• Applying logical progression, using appropriate linking devices (words/phrases showing emphasis sequence etc. are expected to be a part of this answer- as revealed by, initially, later, finally etc. as they impact expression)- cohesion 
• Response relevance and an appropriate conclusion to achieve coherence
• Accuracy in use of grammatical structures, vocabulary and spellings