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The following is an article on the topic MY DREAMS OF THE NEXT MILLENNIUM. Please check it for me and give me marks out of 10. I will be very obliged if you give me a little time and check it. My Dreams of the next Millennium By Saurabh. Recently we have had many technological advancements. We have seen so many inventions. Development is going way farther than we ever expected. But I wonder what will we have achieved by the next millennium. Of course there are still many things left to be discovered. But by this time we may have achieved and corrected our flaws that exist today. Pollution will ne finally done with. Hunger and water scarcity will not even be a question as we produce them more effectively. Corruption will be over with as new leaders will emerge, more loyal and patriotic than ever. Poverty would be eradicated and no one would have to commit any crime. There would be no such things as terrorists. But even more than that, in technology we would have found the many unanswered questions of the space. We would able to go out of our solar system. We would have probably met the aliens. A time will have come where people would think of themselves as human beings first, then maybe in religion. Surely it is a lot to ask for. And it might be that to achieve all things, more time would be required. But all we can have is Hope and Faith. Because things will. So we should brace ourselves for the future to come. Please give me marks and tell me my mistakes. Thank you.

Posted by Jai Doshi 6 years, 10 months ago

CBSE > Class 12 > English Core

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Jai Doshi 6 years, 10 months ago

Thank you everyone for your response. I will make sure of grammar. And about paragraph I wrote it in paras only, but it came in like this here. Thank you very much. ?. I will write the next one and show to you.

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Priyanka Sachdeva 6 years, 10 months ago

I must say u have high thinking capability ... the matter is very impressive ... just make sure write it in 3 diff. Paragraphs as it is article .. u can do this easily as you have written so well ... a bit of mistakes should be improved.. like.. look at 3 line .. we have ever expected .. should be used .. a bit of more mistakes should be corrected .. cant write down all over here.. sry for that ... i will give you 7.5 out of 10 .. make sure you will increase the length of ur matter... good luck for ur exams

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Keshav Bhatter 6 years, 10 months ago

Work on your grammer. And also it is not in the format of article. Divide the article matter in parts. The reader must understand the cause, effect, and lastly conclusion. According to me i will give 6/10

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Keshav Parashar 6 years, 10 months ago

Work on your grammar . Make sentences meaningful Use good vocabulary to gain good marks Acc.to me 6.5 marks out of 10 ?? You can do better if you try more you can score 10 out of 10 good luck ????

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